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sral · 08-23-2015, 03:48 PM

This was illy in parts, loved the formatting, felt it added to the read and its conversational quality. Your writers voice was mostly on point and drove it forwards strongly, occasionally it felt a little less well done, "What a basic hoe" in particular just felt out of place for me, ton ally, you know? These are minor slights though in all honesty. I like you.

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08-23-2015, 03:48 PM	#10
sral LARSLARSLARSLARSLARS Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: CRUMPETVILLE Posts: 8,605 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899395	This was illy in parts, loved the formatting, felt it added to the read and its conversational quality. Your writers voice was mostly on point and drove it forwards strongly, occasionally it felt a little less well done, "What a basic hoe" in particular just felt out of place for me, ton ally, you know? These are minor slights though in all honesty. I like you. Write more! __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)