[UnbornBuddha]

Lars: Decent concept, the tug of war between man and women. Mechanics was solid, but aside from a few lines, I didn't really get too enthralled by the subject material, this time around. It felt kind of stagnant somehow, inspiration wise. Although, the relatability of the concept is apparent, it nevertheless did not really merge with the depth of my being, in terms of how I engaged with it. It was at the surface and upon finishing it, I was like okay, solid but nothing breathtaking. Keep the pen moving, as you say, or more accurately the key board.

MMLP: I guess by your name you really love Eminem, huh? Anyways, I liked this conceptually better than your opponent, although I feel many times you lost focus and went astray into other realms of though. You brought it back, but like another commentator stated your representation of the second picture wasn't the best. I myself did that not too long ago and failed, its hard to really zero in and keep coherency and focus between subject matter. Also, your opponent was more realistic, and I would like to give you the win because I enjoyed the take, but if you executed it much more proficiently you would have taken this.

Vote: sraL