Mr. Complex - First of all, that opening stanza was mad captivating. This is my first read but I felt that needed to be said. Not only did you give me a peer into the man behind the lens, but a look into his life and a general direction. You even found a way to filter in emotion given the title and starting with "I found my parent" (in hell) I am extremely intrigued with peeked interest to say the least. We went very scientific toward the end I loved it. The hypothesis' you brought forth is interesting alone, I'm talking about Heaven and Hell being in unison and continually expanding, contracting and shifting. The fact that this character can see it is intriguing as well because this means it is out there floating and moving about in the infinite expanse that we will never be able to see entirely. I enjoyed this verse although I realize my full enjoyment is skewed because the concept it self is something I would read on my free time, which I suppose this is, but you know what I mean. Dope verse in every sense in my humble opinion. Zero quips aside from I'm not certain 'essenceless' is a word, I got its jest.
U - Didn't think many people would select the same topic as I, it's fun reading these various interpretations. When I read your verses I almost always have to go to dictionary for something and I enjoy this. In this case I had search what sinter meant . That bar is a very powerful and intelligent way of explaining extreme heat, melting all in a spectacle, so much so every siren blares and every eyeball peers. You had some intriguing thoughts in the end, deep concepts of an ant in the milky way. Much like your opponent, this verse is an article I would read on the net while killing time if I came across it. You had a stronger grasp on flow then your opponent and equaled him conceptually I think. It's very rare that I come across two verses in the same week, let alone same battle, that thoroughly grab and hold my attention and left me wanting more in a good way. Very dope battle.
Tough vote, thinking out loud here...
Ullr had a dope vortex imagery in his opening stanza along with quoted sight seeing bar from above.
God Just a dope concept
Too close to call. I have never in my life voted a tie in probably 100+ votes cast
V/Both
Two amazing concepts that were executed exquisitely. One had the better flow but both made me think and ponder, opening my mind. So flow is just the after thought when I took all into consideration. Thank you each for the read.
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