Opera about an opera was comical to me given your concept. Didn't like the easy rhyme scheme of sing/bring/thing etc. That is a very novice end rhyme right there. I enjoyed this verse because it was light heart'd and effective in that sense. Again, nothing overly complex be it rhyme scheme or structure. Enjoyed the pace, you kept going to the next thing and with a sense of fluidity. The taxi line was very fitting and capped off a decent read. The line to pee line fit in cleverly too. All in all this was a fun read that kept my attention and didn't leave me anything to hate aside from that sing/wing/bling couplet. Enjoyed it brother.
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