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Originally Posted by Razah
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dammit man.
I forgot what I said, but whatever- I'll get more in depth with this vote.
To me, this was a no show verse from Innovator, obviously. I knowww he can drop verses that are much better. Anyways, this was short, but I really enjoyed this line.
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A memory lost in relevance.
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Pretty slick.
Dancake had a really dope twist on the topic. I think it's that much doper cuz I don't think that's one of the first thoughts I would've came up with. So, that makes it a little bit better for me.
The wording on this, was kind of weird, but, dope, at the same time. The way it was worded allowed for the story to be developed well. Like "Godcomplex" said, I couldn't tell what her role was, either mother/wife, but, that didn't really matter to me.
I really liked the story. The idea that someone would be out there, doing that, for a lost loved one, is pretty sad, but believable. The best part out of this verse was the actual concept you went with, plus the wording was pretty good. Enjoyed it.
vDancake.
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I hope this is a good enough vote :/