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Old 08-21-2015, 07:33 AM   #11
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I've given it to Chyeahhh as well here. Not the best i've seen from either camp, Chinyeahhh's usual creativity was lacking this time out. The opening line was a complete miss for me, though the joke one that followed up was kinda cool. I literally LOL'd at "when the water splashes up" but not in a good way. Some of his lines wayyy too many syllables long too, I don't care for that shit. Fraze has the better wording, just no real fire concepts or delivery of them. They dont sting. They're just like lovetaps. The ompa loompa line maybe could have been something, as well as the tungsten one, but as it is they just read bland to me.

Kinda close battle as neither really hit the other to TKO them, but I had Chyeahhh barely ahead on points.
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