Not a huge fan of either this week. Thought YDK had better writing on the whole, but delivered the concept of unfaithfulness with an unappreciated air of nonchalance. I felt like his ending was surreal due to convenience, like a highly forced Deus Ex. Rakontur over-dramatized a super basic plot, didn't enjoy his use of language at all. I feel like it was way too aloof without a legitimate reason. Might just be my own eternal dissatisfaction as a reader, because I cast at least one vote like this a week
V/ Rakontur for consistency
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Originally Posted by PancakeBrah
I'm going to start off on a tangent.
when I write, lately, I feel as if I begin by stringing together ambient ideas and concepts, then i realize I'm just typing the words coffee, tawdry, and autumn over and over and over, again, then I pass out dru-
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