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asylum · 08-21-2015, 01:25 AM

Mgvt dancake, he wrote a superior verse in every way. I especially enjoyed the second stanza. The third one threw me through a loop tho. Not really sure what was going on there. Also enjoyed how the rhymes were spread out.

08-21-2015, 01:25 AM	#12
asylum Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 999 Battle Record: 7-5 Rep Power: 8214211	Mgvt dancake, he wrote a superior verse in every way. I especially enjoyed the second stanza. The third one threw me through a loop tho. Not really sure what was going on there. Also enjoyed how the rhymes were spread out.