inno - I understand you thought this would be an easy win but even still I read this and didn't much care for it. Not sure how it fit the topic really and didn't like the content overall
Daniel - I enjoyed the slight twist in the end as well as the somber feel you provided in words. There was emotion to the character, from manuerism to heart break with out ever talking about the emotional loss out in the open. I liked this verse. Was a bit boring in the begining, but you did a good job opening a view of this wife so, there's that.
v/ Daniel
simply had the better verse
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