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Old 08-20-2015, 12:07 PM   #9
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wow well that could have been a really dope battle I think if innovator had dropped something that looked more like a serious verse... I started reading dancakes and thought uhh this aint good...but then when his second verse started it was awesome to see the use of repetition to get his topic across of a lady folding and doing laundry for her son whom im guessing left home or died or something like that and it worked really well with the topic I enjoyed the idea of a woman or mother who wanted to keep her sons clothes clean like she did throughout his life and that was really sentimental and something I totally related to for reasons Id rather not explain.... but my vote goes to dancake for writing a really cool piece overall

vote......dancake
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