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I felt similar to the other voters.. ullrs verse struggled grammaticly and some of the vocabulary was offhand misdirected compared to razahs verse... I also found it difficult to understand how either of these verses connected with the topic... but razahs was much more tactically written and the concepts he used were illustrated much better than ullrs verse. I think that he was closer to the topic as well.. both verses were good it was just easy to see that razahs was written more clearly and sounded like a regular verse that would be posted in a league like this... I think if he worked some of his concepts so that they connected with the topic then he would have had a stronger verse.. but still he came with enough to take my vote at least but good luck to both of these writers and keep dropping.

vote- razah