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Originally Posted by iSpaz
Lets make it another upset...
Ayy..
I'm Picture perfect. Cold Blooded when i hurt vets I'll have this man killed.
When I take these Head Shots like a photographer.. it's only cuz I hold that cam still.
wording is a little off but ok.
You just a Baby. You been realll lazy so you'll end up in a cemetary.
Means if u Kickin Back u gettin killed. . like I shoulda done to u in ur mom's pregnant belly.
harsh but theres no real wit here.
You signed out of 1-2. You run when my Punches come thru ur dome kid..
..That Couple have your whole body Leannin, further than some Styrofoam sips.
liked the concept but not the wording
I will murder you. Got the blades to shank slice and stab ur very own.
But I'll have all that pointed straight at your throat.. Nd I ain't talkin Herringbone.
not feeling this
Shittt I'm ruthless. Just here to rip thru vests and tear limbs like I'm Anakin.
I'll leave your body featureless. . For everyone to see. . like a fuckin mannequin.
didn't like this one either really. everyone to see wasn't set up
Annddd I'm a mean pimp. I be at the gym lifting hos and ur girl a whore.
So when i say I'm going Outsider, pussy.. I'ma pull and pray them bullets make her a corpse.
doesn't quite hit. harsh but the wp misses.
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Sn00p
u're a bitch, so i only use bitch slaps to deck u, wigger
i don't respect ya. u'll never get a closed fist like a Lego figure
clever. cool.
bitch/female dog concepts?! that doesn't work great
ironic: fraze had u looking ancient and THEN u dropped that fucking wordplay
ok i guess
claimin fame off of 1 upset is retarded. nothing decent in YOUR stuff
& i've seen a better spaz/tic battle in the struggle for the top seats at the short bus
this is alright.
so stop running ur mouth unless u hope to die, son
i'd say stop digging ur own grave. but then again, u're probably too broke to buy one
nice concept. liked ths
u're average all over. maybe come w/ a fresh or different plan
cuz the only time i've seen i sticking out, it was wesley snipes in demolition man
this is just ok. a little dated.
2nd seed vs 10th?! but who knows? if ur disses are tough...
this cud end w/ a turn around. maybe just sticking my knife in isn't enough
didn't really like this but it wasn't bad either
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Pretty onesided for sn00p. Spaz had a few bars but sn00p is just to polished to have that many misses against. You had some harsh bars, but you still need add something to them to make them more than statements that rhyme. you had some cool concepts in general tho, so if you can improve your wording i can see you with a better shot in the rematch.
sn00p had a pretty nice verse in general but trailed off slightly at the end. other than that not too much to comment about. enjoyed the read.
Vote: sn00p