mvgt ydk this week.
rak
like razah said, that kentucky fried line really killed it for me. it was an ok attempt at humor but didn't really match the tone of the rest of the piece. i like the doorknob opening tho, that was pretty cool. i like the way fractal coughs sounded but sadly, geometry doesn't really have anything to do with coughing. sorry bud.
ydk
very simple approach, well timed joke... twist fit in well with your flow. mechanics progressed nicely. liked the verse more.
let's see more from you guys next week!
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