sick.
i should probably pick one of your half-assed verses because there's not much to say here.
You have a knack for 2 important things (when you try at your top level): structured rhyming but also incorporating some creative but understandable rhyme-bending.
I saw this also in a particular topical verse which was very very impressive. i'm not digging for the link.. it was a win vs. unbornbuddha somewhere.
i'm of course vastly over-generalizing but, I think, in a way, your style is what I could be if i got a little better.
Everyone's different and I like to be myself. I'm just speaking as far as structural clarity&shit.
But please don't mistake that for shameless fandom; that realm for me is soley reserved for bb
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