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Ullr- dam bro u went hard. Honestly the flow was a little off but you were sticking to a theme I felt as fuck throughout. Cant even mess with it really. I mean, who could?
I would try to like, give you pointers, but you’re obviously more talented than me.
So that would be dumb. Reallyu, I enjoyed this shit. It was dope. I cant fuck with it.
At all.
Flow right here was off tha charts
thus they fell into binds with the raging divorce
of hatred and force, no refrain or remorse
only swing stories and fabrication maintaining with force.
An image of prosperity, reanimating a corpse.
Favorite bars
a singing choir, melting from her stain'd and ever sordid soul.
She prays for change, his blade became a flame that'd bored a hole.
Igniting with striking, he paid a morbid toll
but each swipe's fulgurous brightness paints a story told
inspiration's inundation makes the shore erode
so the seas of those oppressed'd reclaim the glory of old.
Id quote this whole verse. Nuff said . keep doing you. Like that old time vocab. Shit was tense.
Inno- government* has an N in it. Anyways, shit was tight. You took ahold of the topic real sick like. Around the point you said “but” you honestly could’ve used a lot more syllables. Idk, I think you knew you were beat and kinda threw something at us we could palate to save face. And tbh, you succeeded. So I don’t really need to go beyond that. I know you’re capable of more. Look forward to that in the future.
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