Tbh it's cool from a rhyme perspective.
And maybe you threw it in there subconsciously as a frustration of how dark the night can be and how "empty" the world can be when viewed through a certain lens.
Or it was written first and then you just made a good but totally unrelated verse above it.
Or maybe it was, more generally, a sort of purposeful anarchy to contrast with the rest of the story.
Do you like how I'm still speculating? It's fun. And maybe that's why you wrote it-- to have the reader speculate.
Or maybe, as I contend, "for the fuck of it".
I still stick by that one.
Close thread plz (< jk on that part).
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