[Victor.]

Originally Posted by Bust

Dooooog,

I spit phrases that thrill, but it's a hobby to murder too,
See i got some frazes that kill.. In fact He Constantly bodies n buries u,
cool personal attempt here, but the execution felt sorta lazy.. if the setup here was more relevant to him constantly losing to fraze I think it could have been a stronger line
If u can't beat um join um, that's a bitch move n u no longer should Rap
S'like fraze gets u the ball on the block n u lob it up. u gotta POST stronger than that
LOL ok this is dope
Ur too girly man, type to self tan in early Jan., n claim to suck a dick up mean
Damn, I'd love to find a reason NOT to call latte bitch but when he coffee spits up cream
cool attempt here, I like how u tried to tie in the multiple schemes in the punch, I just find the LATTE bit forced. maybe not tho, its borderline. I still dig the bar for the creativty
Always writing long as verses.. Pure trash, I'm like bitch surrender the pen
I mean ull drop 20 lines to get 1 quote.. Resulting in a hit percentage of 10..
LOL! this my fav style of punch, I really liked this line. super sting
^thsts awful taste, so get back to tossin salads n talkin fake
Cuz Why worry bout lotto smirk, when baby wipes'll get that shit eating grin off ya face
this is aight, the "baby wipes" part thru me off cuz it dont add anything to the bar

Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk

if the weapons out, I'm killing I ain't missing u TRUST
cus when I'm letting them off it's certain the shots are destined to bust
ok but sorta bland
I'm a Bond villain u lack vision no-ones predicting u might win
u had a good run on the odd job but now ima take ur head off just like him
ok but again its sorta just there, its really lacking emotion or ur personality. i think u need to find a away to come thru more in ur bars
this is easy for me, u sleazy wen u free, against u I'll waste ten
cus when I write Ispaz rhymes u just looked retarded when u faced them
ok cool, this is good
don't give a fuck what u done on RB cus on netcees u a joker
u NEED that work on rap battles cus here we still apply to u as mediocre
eh, this is kinda just a bar that should of been left on the cutting room floor
The guns are out making sure u dead, hush featured u for to long ur lame
So I'm entering the next round, emptying it N leaving u w/ just 2 mags to your name
hmm. the beginning was fire. entering the next round and emptying it... that was really good. u ended it awkward and weak sadly. so the punch didnt land full power
G/l

I got bust here.