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My vote gets edited in here in about 10-20 minutes. don't close it yet.

Edit:

Nigma: Great showing. The flow and rhyme-structure throughout was on point and well crafted imo. Some interesting lines in there but would like it to go more in depth on the subject matter rather than just scratching the surface of why it went wrong, but that's nitpicking. You followed the topic well with a theme I didn't see coming, cool. The closure couldn't have been better, loved everything about the last 3-4 lines. You caught my attention with the opener and the closure left me with a good impression of your piece, well done.

Mike Wrecka: Haha, I didn't see that coming. A muh'fuckin' T-Rex, huh? Creative twist to the story. It was kinda short, but that's cool, I can enjoy short pieces. You did the topic justice and the rhymescheme was decent. I liked the approach you were taking and enjoyed the read.

My vote goes to Nigma. While Mike Wrecka wins on the creativity department and went all-out with it I felt that Nigma gets it on consistency, rhyme structure, interesting lines and story. Mike Wrecka had a good showing for sure but looking at the stories at hand and picking a winner I think Nigma edges it in this one with a more serious tone to his verse and stuff that made me think. I just can't get how an animal whose closest relative on earth today is the chicken can plan and/or evaluate the situation like a human being, but then again, the verse was all fiction so everything goes I guess. Either way I think Nigma got it. MW's verse was enjoyable for sure, but he didn't show me enough to snatch my vote.