[UnbornBuddha]

A very distinct style you have. Almost seems weaponized, in a way. You have a lot of schemes, and for the most part it carries out well. Although, I can't say I particularly enjoyed the story or was engrossed by it. But it did have some very distinct lines, like the dissection of a schizo second consciousness, that can be a real cool verse right there. But, like I said I think the writing comes off as very skillful, but the skill was applied, in areas that do not contribute to a more engrossing story.

Thanks for the read, and hope you keep participating. It would be nice to see what else you can concoct. I feel like you are capable of much more, and I would like to witness it.