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Originally Posted by Mr. J
hated how you used force twice
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Yup.
Besides that, I enjoyed the piece. There isn't really much to say. The topic was executed really well. As far as the technical part of the verse, besides little stuff I would be nitpicking, it was very solid.
Also, ignominized, not a word.
Inno, I really liked your verse. Your imagery is really dope, I think that's one of the best aspects of your writing. I think if you had done something different with the topic, or even if you had the same general idea as Ullr, you might have won this battle. With that being said,
vUllr