I'm your dark horse, killing all these veteran dudes and beheading 'em too
So, yo, Remy Lebeau...
...How you gonna compete, when u already admitted i'm better than you?
nice!
Idgaf how many boys u got, you can still get this work if you're ten deep
Gat make his eyes roll back in his head...then in the dirt is where REM sleep
ill
^That's smart bars, here's another, I know his custom title plays on his mind
He always get his card charged...cuz his broke ass can't make repayments in time
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We're chums b, but friendships a fine line, this a race i gotta win cuz I'm hungry
Try to get past, i'll forget u exist so fast u'll think i'm slim n ur young zee
decent
Everyone thinks ur gamble, but I know ur rly just some lame veteran dude
knew you weren't him when I saw ur bars...cuz even he is WAY better than you
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best verse i've seen on this site so far - i haven't read many - started off real nice and flaked towards the end - some of the latter bars got a bit lazy - weakest was the young zee line - didn't roll off the tounge as well as you started - but still very solid- good job.
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Archives show he duck ban battles ALOT, I see fgts like him everyday in the world.
Bitches never let em see the pink's lip.. n he avoided those matches like they was a girl.
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All ur pics show girls keeping their distance, quit grasping for attention.
U prob talk shit then watch as ur friends owned.. while girls do that n laugh at ur intentions.
okay
lol @ ur wrestling post, u prob think gay marriage = evolving.
Yall seen the foxcatcher.. thats the only type of love story he'll ever be involved in.
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I said u the dark horse but honestly- ya talent need to take some roids.
Lol @ u winning the tourney....
Every text battle u had in the past u either no showed, or sucked a mods dick to make it void.
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U know wrestling's fake, easy bro I know to u that's some tragic shit.
the fights are scripted.. but u fight to write a script where ur tag partner doesn't have to flip.
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another solid verse - overall it was solid i don't have too much to critique in particular - i could be missing some of the lines because of personals - i think if you threw in a few multis this verse would have been way hotter.
overall - vote Witty - this was a verse close battle - not much between the two verses but Witty had my favourite bar of the battle - good job to both.
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