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Ruck · 08-11-2015, 07:03 AM

I spit phrases that thrill, but it's a hobby to murder too,
See i got some frazes that kill.. In fact He Constantly bodies n buries u,
okay
If u can't beat um join um, that's a bitch move n u no longer should Rap
S'like fraze gets u the ball on the block n u lob it up. u gotta POST stronger than that
cool idea
Ur too girly man, type to self tan in early Jan., n claim to suck a dick up mean
Damn, I'd love to find a reason NOT to call latte bitch but when he coffee spits up cream
cool idea but indirect?
Always writing long as verses.. Pure trash, I'm like bitch surrender the pen
I mean ull drop 20 lines to get 1 quote.. Resulting in a hit percentage of 10..
weak.
^thsts awful taste, so get back to tossin salads n talkin fake
Cuz Why worry bout lotto smirk, when baby wipes'll get that shit eating grin off ya face
second line was nice but the first ruined it a bit..

had some nice ideas - decent verse but can use work in all areas - better set ups will compliment your good ideas on the second line.

v

if the weapons out, I'm killing I ain't missing u TRUST
cus when I'm letting them off it's certain the shots are destined to bust
not really hard hitting?
I'm a Bond villain u lack vision no-ones predicting u might win
u had a good run on the odd job but now ima take ur head off just like him
cool
this is easy for me, u sleazy wen u free, against u I'll waste ten
cus when I write Ispaz rhymes u just looked retarded when u faced them
cool
don't give a fuck what u done on RB cus on netcees u a joker
u NEED that work on rap battles cus here we still apply to u as mediocre
decent
The guns are out making sure u dead, hush featured u for to long ur lame
So I'm entering the next round, emptying it N leaving u w/ just 2 mags to your name
okay

solid verse - first bar was weak though but overall it was good.

overall - vote - Lotto Smirk - had the better verse overall imo - both had a good showing though - stay up.

08-11-2015, 07:03 AM	#4
Ruck that's not me. Join Date: Aug 2015 Posts: 47 Battle Record: 0-2 Rep Power: 3436004	I spit phrases that thrill, but it's a hobby to murder too, See i got some frazes that kill.. In fact He Constantly bodies n buries u, okay If u can't beat um join um, that's a bitch move n u no longer should Rap S'like fraze gets u the ball on the block n u lob it up. u gotta POST stronger than that cool idea Ur too girly man, type to self tan in early Jan., n claim to suck a dick up mean Damn, I'd love to find a reason NOT to call latte bitch but when he coffee spits up cream cool idea but indirect? Always writing long as verses.. Pure trash, I'm like bitch surrender the pen I mean ull drop 20 lines to get 1 quote.. Resulting in a hit percentage of 10.. weak. ^thsts awful taste, so get back to tossin salads n talkin fake Cuz Why worry bout lotto smirk, when baby wipes'll get that shit eating grin off ya face second line was nice but the first ruined it a bit.. had some nice ideas - decent verse but can use work in all areas - better set ups will compliment your good ideas on the second line. v if the weapons out, I'm killing I ain't missing u TRUST cus when I'm letting them off it's certain the shots are destined to bust not really hard hitting? I'm a Bond villain u lack vision no-ones predicting u might win u had a good run on the odd job but now ima take ur head off just like him cool this is easy for me, u sleazy wen u free, against u I'll waste ten cus when I write Ispaz rhymes u just looked retarded when u faced them cool don't give a fuck what u done on RB cus on netcees u a joker u NEED that work on rap battles cus here we still apply to u as mediocre decent The guns are out making sure u dead, hush featured u for to long ur lame So I'm entering the next round, emptying it N leaving u w/ just 2 mags to your name okay solid verse - first bar was weak though but overall it was good. overall - vote - Lotto Smirk - had the better verse overall imo - both had a good showing though - stay up.