[Mr. J]

the togetherness, too, pair/ separate/ reduced
to ventures of sexual youth
for a spell & a moon, seldom seduced-
wasn't thinking, unpredicted,
innocent scratch in a crystalline ball
distant, detached, delicious dissolved
a hit of this acid & existence revolves

I really enjoyed this section right here, your vocab choice is top notch these days
I remember the first time you popped in around these parts and I was like yea he's dope
& you still continue to impress me after all this time that it's really enjoyable...
this whole piece is written in such a poetic fashion & the flow of it is basically off the charts
you set up so much with so little & that's what makes reading your work worth the view
you have a knack for staying on topic and just writing your ass off when you choose to
dope shit brah!