[Mr. J]

This seemed very short story esque & beyond what most people aim for when writing
once you get past the opening lines you delve more deeper into the mindset of practically anyone
you draw on the inspirations around you and use it to your advantage, it's slick but some of it doesn't stick for me
I normally enjoy a well thought out piece, and at first this seemed like a jumble that needed to be pieced together
it's dope but at the same time there is some editing that needs to be involved..
compared to your other work this was decently done but that opening sequence is a misfire to what it led up to..
still dope regardless