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Old 08-08-2015, 01:20 PM   #14
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You been in the NBL…
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since Lama started it; & till this day not champin it must still bother
hoping this is the year u finally make a splash… that’s a cannonball on spilled water
- this was tough
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see, I got flow, wording & concepts; all the shit u missing, son
this won’t end well… when a quarter of ya skill was wasted on a wishing one
- good
got that natural salt & pepper look; bitches stare, like & touch it
while Ron Burgundy could be the color commentator for ya hair dyin process
- touch it/process don't really rhyme but wasn't feelin' this bar anyways
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I’m supposed to fear this nonsense with ur lame ass kid stuff?
ya whole style’s water down… gunplay comes in a see-thru bag that reads ages 6+
- ha! this was fire
OutSiders aren’t typical performers; how’ll u haters, match it?
makin u kill yaself is our bread & butter… while the Suicide Squad gets baker acted
- liked the concept, not your route of execution tho
take ya bashin, betta have a boxer’s mentality to last in this place
u like the Tyson of text… not cuz of ur punches but how stupid u look with tatts on ya face
- lol cool

dope verse overall. consistent as fuck. only 1 bar was off imo but the rest was effective. good shit.

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Lets get something clear u're an old fuck aint no "these clips" or "poppin tres"..
If ur gun bars aint about muskets we don't believe shit u got to say
- not sure I get this one bro? at 1st thought it was some type of play on the cologne MUSK, considering old people wear it, but it wasn't so IDK wtf you were talkin' about tbh
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U're Bags flunky how could u stop this u'll get trounced like a novice
He's been batting clean up for u so long ur fuckin house should be spotless
- this was tough
Im like a determined gambler at them slots when I dump at his clique
Cause ima just keep pulling that metal until something gets hit!
- miss for me
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2 shots to stop him then 2 more incase he's breathing, ima slay him
People will talk about the 4 Nik ate more than a freaky conversation
- lol, clean and creative. I fucks w/ it
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& ur whole crew should know that Sho sparks deadly...
It's ironic that in this cuban cigar a bunch of niggas that i've smoked already
- cuban cigar/cuban sig are's a dope play on a played concept bro. props on the flip my man imo this was fire
Ur 40 stop battling & buying crap while ur child scavenge & starves
Cause the way Un fit u in that casket is the type of parent you are
- nah, this was predicitable from the second I seen un fit tbh. knew which way you were going to execute this concept

not a bad verse but some heavy misses imo. batting clean up, 4 nik ate and cuban cigar were all bangers but the rest was light imo. not enough to take this.

Nik got it
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