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Old 08-07-2015, 09:19 AM   #3
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But them checks when the weekends tell me its worth it
Maybe worded different this line would be better, but as a stand alone im left with wanting clarification.

My burdens feel like a motherfucking ball and a chain, starvin for fame
the rap game is putty in my palms, ima boss, and im already made
up until this point, it was reading well, catching a nice scheme, but i think the shortage of a syllable here hindered the flow a bit. maybe a simple and i have it already made
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