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Old 08-06-2015, 02:22 PM   #9
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see i'm a Pimp wit a Magicians tactics how all ur women get took
i got ur mom, girl AND sister on the same Page.. nigga thats every Trick in the Book!

u a Vet? look me in my eyes n say that. u cud see that i spray gats
make a Tier drop from murders if u cross between my eyes.. those are NOT face tats
these bullets won't miss ya. drum clip kill the whole fam includin ya lil sister
cus this 30'll take that young bitch out quick.. my chopper nickname is Strikta

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I thought this was pretty slick, some of the set ups were siiiiick
other than that the other lines seemed alright
couldn't really fuck with that getting dressed line seemed...weird
that opener was pretty cool but felt light to me
not too much to complain about, that closer was pretty cool though
if you switched the wording around the punch would have hit harder
dope verse though

You and Hush ain't hush hush, that shits not cute it's depressing
He been the vehicle for ur success. Now I'ma go Uber request em for ur funeral procession
Like that Sinatra dude's the worrrssst, but you? random same use of words
Fuck the comparisons. I'm just here to give u this Shank treatment that u deserve

You can run, I don't care, I'm good to chase and spray targets
Like Mila in that Jim Beam commercial - this barrel here got your name on i

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I thought this was pretty dope, that set up in the beginning I wasn't feeling though
it just kind of odd to me....the punch was pretty dope though...so I'm on the fence about it
wasn't really feeling the pick & pop or the staples line...I get it, it just seemed off putting
something about it didn't feel right, otherwise that closer was pretty clean
dope verse...

v/Cred, I feel like he came with the better set ups & some pretty cool punches
I thought Junto's verse was pretty cool, it just didn't sit right with me on those misses
I felt like that staples line could have been dropped & he could have used something else
otherwise Cred got it due to consistency
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