U must feel ancient, spent ur glory days textin n still ain't shit
What stories u gon tell ur grandkids? That u disputed so many losses u got called a plaintiff.
He said this only for the elite, well I question that with ur history of sins, yo
Fuckin crybaby biter, u shouldn't give a F Y I made it, When the real question is WTF ur info
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I thought this was pretty decent as far as your verses go
I didn't really enjoy that opener, it felt too wordy to work out for me
sticking to the same concept for the next bar hurt you
same with using the plaintiff idea again, this felt rushed to me
if you taken a moment to work out what you had I'm sure it would have worked
either way decent verse
Where is ur track list? U'll never b THAT sick.
When your idea of 'Heavy Rotation' is dating several Fat Chicks.
U a queeeer in ya hood. Busts a basic n' wack fiend.
Last week I drew cuz of Remy Boyz, & this week I'm facing a Trap Queen
Dude don't wana test the Ruger. You a peon, pest, and loser.
Netcees want Bust Out of their Threads. it'd bring back Deon, Metts & User
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these lines were clean, that heavy rotations made me LOL
didn't really enjoy that disappointed line too much
the opener was ok just came across worded funny...
otherwise I feel like you handled yourself pretty well here
v/Orc, he came with a stronger verse and had some better hits
Bust did work but it came across a little rushed to me.
seemed like he didn't have enough to time to properly set everything up
using 'plaintiff' twice toned down the second punch, either way decent verse
nice battle fella's
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