[Pharaohs Army]

aint a site you could go that dont know who i am
if thats the case, then its home to a bunch of nobodies then

lmfao.

you're really humble in this one, especially toward the end.
lol

I like rapping your shit because your multeez are easy to identify. like, what you are rhyming with what.

Also, many of your commas are not "literary commas", but rather frames of reference for delivery. I do this too nowadays. Please try explaining this to some other people here.

This is good but you've got better in you; I've seen it. But I understand,of course,that based on the tone it is not intended to be a magnum opus but rather a self-confidence/shock-value thingy.