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Old 08-05-2015, 12:51 PM   #7
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Hmm. I feel like Innovator had a more well rounded verse.

Also, it was a lot smoother for me to read. I prefer simplicity in verses. I "rap" these verses out loud, so when bars get too wordy it throws the whole flow off for me. I'm glad we all have an extensive vocabulary, and, that's great and all, but sometimes I get the feeling people use certain words to make a line 'pop' more, sometimes it works well, sometimes it doesn't.

I felt like that about a majority of asylum's verse. It was a good verse, but a little too wordy for my liking. With that being said, I'm going to give this vote to Innovator. His verse was just real smooth to me.

Both of you guys had dope verses, I just liked Innovator's better.

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