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Originally Posted by Whys Ways
You duck duck gooses ain't used to this pond's current
Best'ta stay home when the red cape flows, Spawns lurkin'
Equilibrium's off, but you're fuckin' w/the wrong cleric
Ohhh, you quick on it? Well I draws perfect
Come here, gimme a hand- lets see if this saws workin
im sniffing 4 grams w/lindsey lohan watching disney programs
swigging coke cans in a kidney stone scan
it seems you have the perfect skin for furnishing
walk into the furnace wind burning a turkish blend
time to kill. wanna see gore on ya wrist watch?
& get the same shit that the chloroformed bitch got?
be my cordial guest as I torture you dressed as Corey from slipknot
blaze a chorus? I have different ways to torch it
have that whore looking like spacey in pay it forward
something stronga? columbiana- make a corpse & trace an orchid
& the bullets are messy, run when I'm pulling the dessy
have you holding ya belly leaking petroleum jelly
send me ya wife, plus some henny & ice
look out for Benny at night unless you're lending ya life
cuz the hollow tip I give you isn't empty advice
trying to take my soul? don't tempt me homos
put a ginger's head on the wall like the Wendy's logo
few beers & a blunt, throw a spear in a cunt
do I do drugs? one whiff of this mirror & ya numb
shut up bitch fo I cut up tits like tears of the sun
party time? all the kids call me mr clown nose
got the perfect murder planned out for gwenith paltrow
taste the acid rain when god pees. I like to save the bodies
mommy says that every time a virgin's raped, a cross bleeds
we'll be friends til the end, this the voodoo hex
suffocate my face like jack in the cuckoo's nest
embalming music, not even the dead cats ignore me
jump ship- shoot a flare in your meth laboratory
Fuck your Hocus Pocus, old letters & spells
This Brit Murph kept in a cell... I, never, will, tell
Out the depths of the well, to climbing out of your set
Make a new tape? Too late, died surrounded in wet
Address? Elm St.. Don't even lie down for a sec
When Gabriel takes control, sign's found on the neck
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Hmm. Your rhyming ability is awesome( 4 grams w/ lindsey lohan ^ dope). Your flow was mostly on point and there were some creative spots but then at times it seemed like you were rhyming to rhyme. I think if you utilized your rhyme ability in a meaningful and organized way in every line it would impact harder. However, im new to the site. I may find later i'm wrong. I'll have to see as i read more from you. Definitely above avarage anyway.
My favorite part was prob chloroform bitch got/corey from slipknot lines.
Stay up dude.