[Destroyer]

these were pretty even to me, fellas, so unfortunately my vote won't help, but I'm gonna throw a little feed in anyway.
liked both pieces
vulgar - very nice contrast between love and war, good imagery, maybe too specific in some which almost takes away from it for me, mention of the Blitzkreig for example, the politician comment. it's almost another voice that says those things, your own intellect, and not the subject of the piece, if that makes any sense to you.

snoop, dug the rhyme schemes and word usage for sure, but I just couldn't get to where you were going with it. it seemed like I'd just like to see it fleshed out more, but I just didn't know if you were talking about clowns, or war, or just a guy who got married and was unhappy, I don't know, I want you to steer me more, I guess.

anyway, both were cool, neither stood out as a winner to me though.

so, vote
tie