ur a loser, just a joke ass nigga that was always gonna fall
so watch me give SNL, without a script or a skit involved
weak
when ya block gets lit, I hope them bullets catch this boy sooner
shots leave em with so much pad work, u'd think he was trainin with floyd jr
decent
his lover? I slip her the freshest dick until she's begging me to stop
nigga u give her that bumpy Johnson, n STILL can't get gangsta w/ the box
weak
im prince hakeem to the board. they worship ya boy in good fashion
only time this nigga'll have roses at his feet, is right before they close the casket
not really hitting him, generic...
he's screamin turn the racket down, me n his batch go plenty rounds
cuz ill hit that box from mad angles...I call it the pacquiao
okay not bad
ur slight work for my crew, homie I know ur type, listen...
we can gun down snooper scope em out, no need for the night vision
again it's a bit generic..
i felt like you could have used this verse against anyone, unless i've missed some personals. you are battling someone named Snoop, you should have worked on more direct nameplays against him, decent effort but i think this was a bit half assed, stay up.
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ur shit sucks. so i got $10k saying this geek'll be dead
no one likes Odd'ish but at least there is green on his head
first line was weak but the second pretty creative, good.
fight night win? generics were the ONLY kinda bar ya deployed...
each of ur opponents cud'a been so many men, one of 'em handed arya a coin
good idea but could've been worded better
kid. seeding got u an uphill battle & me another win to my name
odd saw himself matched w/ a 2... & immediately closed tinder in shame
weak
but he doesn't see that he gets no respect in the NBL. this man is retarded
only person that wants u in the league is uh-oh tryna get football fantasy started
i guess this is a person i won't get but i liked the set up
facefuck any bitch close to u. TRUST i went hard on ur wife
had her head go up & down w/ a smile on my face... call me lama the lime
weak
& ur whole fam can get it, but i won't bring a burner
swing the bat & have OddParents flying thru the air like i'm timmy turner
this was creative, decent
you definetly had some more creative ideas then Odd Ways, some creative ideas that i thought would have been a lot better if executed better. Don't take my harsh criticism as bad, this verse had potential, good effort.
Overall - Vote - Sn00p - approached this battle a lot better and actually took shot at his opponent, verse lacked some execution but the ideas were solid.
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