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Aero · 07-31-2015, 07:26 PM

Muff:

you got caught redhanded. that much is just flagrant
nigga you stole a line from a nigga who stole a line. n now u usin that as justification
statementish but I'm sure it sounded hard to you when you read it aloud
ur squad saw that. got sick n went right to the bathroom
u bit down n failed SS in the process like a Nazi chewin on cyanide capsules
the SS/Nazi angle is played out but this was still ok
im after this guy. ask urself how i rap on the fly
Said u were Cutting ur Teeth in the League. Lie detector test determined that was a Lie
umm, do you mean how his teeth were chattering? this is a nice concept it just could be cleaner.. maybe if the set up was more personal
Im trashing your penmanship. that lip u yappin aint offendin shit
U said calumet the suburbs. Ok. where that hood at where they steal rap on the internet
I get the source of this line so this may hit better for me than others. I liked the wit here.
lol at how that went down tho. holy shit
Funny you from the Windy City n u hoped them biting accusations would Blow Over Quick
this was good, solid.
Like AMEN stole it too! agregrious right?! nigga.. mcs just write
I aint seen 2 theives cross each other like this since a crucification....JESUS CHRIST.
loooool, this was hard!
you said u bodied OS w/ that crew diss. I must be much too blind
Either this blunt got to my head or u won a Fight Night and lost your fucking mind
this hits because its facts
this broad is sad. i normally dont acknowledge trash
Hush said "he wasnt stacking up on talent". lol thats codeword for "Listen Cred, Your bars are Ass"
nahh
this bitch is just see through.LMAO this shit is just lethal
ok creddddd. we get it. we fucking get it man. your clickin da eagle
a different angle on this personal would've made this work
Im the Tom Brady of text. Or a lunatic. u guys should do much to just stop him
when i have u Running Back to Rb just know I wasnt Playing N it wasnt an Option
Tom Brady not the best example to use with recent events esp after pointing out Cred's lack of integrity.. as far the whole bar it seems 2006ish

Overall this was cool. That cross line was hard and you followed it up with some good stuff. Style here was a bit unorthodox I feel as though if you're going to be unorthodox it has to be great otherwise just play it safe and throw the jab. Wild hooks that miss can take away from your power.

Cred:

i'm a known biter? pfft. u all over da site tryna convince dat ur flows tighter
bitch u so Charged Up.. i thought Meek Mills aired u out for havin a ghost writer
aight, it's recent but I can already see it being played
i put FAKE niggas to rest n i got deadly aim wit the smith n wess
i'm comin wit sum shit so off the wall ur splattered brains'll be impressed
this is weird for me because the brain is the control center for who a person is.. but conceptually its nice
wit all dese tourneys u ain't champ shit. u gayed shit up like a faggot
Now u makin da BAT look fucked up like ya dumbass swung at a bad pitch
no sir
dis kids a disgrace. u wrote 50 lines vs a nigga dissin his face
all on ya laptop, head Bent close as fuck to ya screen.. bitch u cudn't even look at it STRAIGHT!
this could've been dope but the whole look at it Straight angle nah
eryone on da board said u was gay. i'm like but he write tough, i'm sure it ain't true
den u went n said Orc was handsome.. DEAD @ da irony of men being Suited for u
I don't get the suited for you source but I'll pretend its a personal.. didn't like this
u on vacay throwin bitch fits? u got no hoes n no liquor cus u da broke type
it's hilarious as fuck dat u bar out on open tabs but neva opened a tab in a bar ya whole life
tabs concept is played but this was ok
u came in dis fight beat up. n i'm a choke da life outta ya if u think it isn't true
cuz murda left Knots on ya head.. n I'm tying a fuckin bag over it to finish u
okay
man u suck bitch. bullets Ring out better duck for cover n run quick
only reason u'll look like a Champ after s'cuz da fluids'll Pour Down ur back wen i Bucket
I liked the creative attempt, not usually a punchline I like do to it not being technically sound[/B]
son needs help. a fuckin fiend on the net. Muff u're sumthin else
bitch u're like a Karaoke selfie how u spend ur nights Hi... n Bye... ur fuckin self
lol dope
da glock or da nine. i'll pull out dat beak nose wen i pop at his mind
i'll be squeezin that eagle til i knock ur fuckin head off like Lama the Lime
the bar Muff referring to this really made this bar look silly

Overall there was some good concepts I just didn't like the execution. Felt it should've been cleaner

A lot of misses in this battle. Both verses needed polishing. Seems rushed by both sides. I will say though I liked energy that reverberated through the cadences and delivery of both textcees. Muff had a couple of lines that really stood out to me that showed his capacity for the grasp of an effective punchline. Cred played it safer here but he didn't execute well enough to beat Muff here.

MVGT MUFF

07-31-2015, 07:26 PM	#10
Aero GOAT Join Date: Jul 2015 Posts: 4,826 Battle Record: 14-17 Champed - Site Diss Competition - Tag Tournament III - Lyric Olympics - Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant" Rep Power: 0	Muff: you got caught redhanded. that much is just flagrant nigga you stole a line from a nigga who stole a line. n now u usin that as justification statementish but I'm sure it sounded hard to you when you read it aloud ur squad saw that. got sick n went right to the bathroom u bit down n failed SS in the process like a Nazi chewin on cyanide capsules the SS/Nazi angle is played out but this was still ok im after this guy. ask urself how i rap on the fly Said u were Cutting ur Teeth in the League. Lie detector test determined that was a Lie umm, do you mean how his teeth were chattering? this is a nice concept it just could be cleaner.. maybe if the set up was more personal Im trashing your penmanship. that lip u yappin aint offendin shit U said calumet the suburbs. Ok. where that hood at where they steal rap on the internet I get the source of this line so this may hit better for me than others. I liked the wit here. lol at how that went down tho. holy shit Funny you from the Windy City n u hoped them biting accusations would Blow Over Quick this was good, solid. Like AMEN stole it too! agregrious right?! nigga.. mcs just write I aint seen 2 theives cross each other like this since a crucification....JESUS CHRIST. loooool, this was hard! you said u bodied OS w/ that crew diss. I must be much too blind Either this blunt got to my head or u won a Fight Night and lost your fucking mind this hits because its facts this broad is sad. i normally dont acknowledge trash Hush said "he wasnt stacking up on talent". lol thats codeword for "Listen Cred, Your bars are Ass" nahh this bitch is just see through.LMAO this shit is just lethal ok creddddd. we get it. we fucking get it man. your clickin da eagle a different angle on this personal would've made this work Im the Tom Brady of text. Or a lunatic. u guys should do much to just stop him when i have u Running Back to Rb just know I wasnt Playing N it wasnt an Option Tom Brady not the best example to use with recent events esp after pointing out Cred's lack of integrity.. as far the whole bar it seems 2006ish Overall this was cool. That cross line was hard and you followed it up with some good stuff. Style here was a bit unorthodox I feel as though if you're going to be unorthodox it has to be great otherwise just play it safe and throw the jab. Wild hooks that miss can take away from your power. Cred: i'm a known biter? pfft. u all over da site tryna convince dat ur flows tighter bitch u so Charged Up.. i thought Meek Mills aired u out for havin a ghost writer aight, it's recent but I can already see it being played i put FAKE niggas to rest n i got deadly aim wit the smith n wess i'm comin wit sum shit so off the wall ur splattered brains'll be impressed this is weird for me because the brain is the control center for who a person is.. but conceptually its nice wit all dese tourneys u ain't champ shit. u gayed shit up like a faggot Now u makin da BAT look fucked up like ya dumbass swung at a bad pitch no sir dis kids a disgrace. u wrote 50 lines vs a nigga dissin his face all on ya laptop, head Bent close as fuck to ya screen.. bitch u cudn't even look at it STRAIGHT! this could've been dope but the whole look at it Straight angle nah eryone on da board said u was gay. i'm like but he write tough, i'm sure it ain't true den u went n said Orc was handsome.. DEAD @ da irony of men being Suited for u I don't get the suited for you source but I'll pretend its a personal.. didn't like this u on vacay throwin bitch fits? u got no hoes n no liquor cus u da broke type it's hilarious as fuck dat u bar out on open tabs but neva opened a tab in a bar ya whole life tabs concept is played but this was ok u came in dis fight beat up. n i'm a choke da life outta ya if u think it isn't true cuz murda left Knots on ya head.. n I'm tying a fuckin bag over it to finish u okay man u suck bitch. bullets Ring out better duck for cover n run quick only reason u'll look like a Champ after s'cuz da fluids'll Pour Down ur back wen i Bucket I liked the creative attempt, not usually a punchline I like do to it not being technically sound[/B] son needs help. a fuckin fiend on the net. Muff u're sumthin else bitch u're like a Karaoke selfie how u spend ur nights Hi... n Bye... ur fuckin self lol dope da glock or da nine. i'll pull out dat beak nose wen i pop at his mind i'll be squeezin that eagle til i knock ur fuckin head off like Lama the Lime the bar Muff referring to this really made this bar look silly Overall there was some good concepts I just didn't like the execution. Felt it should've been cleaner A lot of misses in this battle. Both verses needed polishing. Seems rushed by both sides. I will say though I liked energy that reverberated through the cadences and delivery of both textcees. Muff had a couple of lines that really stood out to me that showed his capacity for the grasp of an effective punchline. Cred played it safer here but he didn't execute well enough to beat Muff here. MVGT MUFF __________________ Too Rich IRL to Be Here. I'm Out.