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Old 07-29-2015, 04:04 PM   #5
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I seen ur pics. You lookin like a real bitch I'll Roast this fake boss..
..One punch'll have your grill leaking and drip down like fuckin steak sauce.
I bust Cannons. Right where you standin'll get u killed cruelly.
So I'll keep all them shots ROLLIN on you.. nd I ain't filmin a movie.
Mannn you gay. Always tryna play wit dudes extremeties.
It's like his hunger never stops.. no matter how many faggots give Remedy.

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I thought this whole section was pretty dope
I enjoyed that steak sauce line that was pretty slick
the last part of this section was nice and made me lol
didn't enjoy that opener, and that closer didn't feel like a punch
either way this was a cool verse..

U ain't getting better, s'why ur so easily defeated.
The only way u could be the victor.. Is battling urself like he did.
Ur shits played and most ur flows r no go.
I laugh when u bust.. Cause he's the ONLY win u got that wasn't a no show.
He's pussy, prob walks around with a purse n zima.
always ovary acting.. Bitching about a loss worse than Gina.

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I thought this whole section was pretty slick
I didn't really enjoy that closer, but that IKEA shit was LOL
you went in on this verse though and it shows...
nice work


v/Remy he had a more consistent set of punches aimed at his opponent
Spaz had some dope lines but seemed more like a swag & flow verse to me
otherwise I thought he delivered some nice lines but his punches didn't land
Remy just came across with a better set of ideas, nice battle fellas
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