[Mr. J]

n that chick u hold dear, I hit her raw let's be clear
the way my shaft lifted that bitch, she'd revolutionize pole vaulting for yrs
to hush he's great, but to the league he's gay
it's ironic that after i spaz out, he'll get bodied for 2 weeks straight
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This was the better part of your verse that hit
that opener made me chuckle a bit & made me think it was going to be dope
but then I got to the 'go fish' section and it just seemed worded funny
I didn't really like that closer either, something was off about that
but otherwise I enjoyed the section quoted above

Ya whole Stee is broke, not sure if doe could fix but no1's as lame as U be, ways
So take this sign, can, n ur bummy style to a I-75 off ramp where changes to be made
U ain't talked about cos ur Wack, so wouldn't it be retarded if ya buzzin,
I mean this bitch has to butt his head in every fuckin thread to be part of the discussion
Spent ur whole life on boards n u FINALLY won ur first site award
see off the top I wanted to give u lots a props... But FN's not a tourny to be prewritin for
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I feel like you really built up steam right here..
that opening bar was cool but seemed worded funny
as for the section that followed it was cool, but could have hit harder
I really enjoyed a majority of the ending though..nice work

v/I got Bust on this one, I thought Odd kind of shot himself in the foot.
He came nicely but due to wording and a clunky finish I feel Bust edged it out
dope battle fella's