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Originally Posted by Witty
Want my Toy's Story? it lives above Dis Knee ready to hit Cars
And when it's Drawn Out, shit gets uglier than your Pixar
- Creative. I fucks w/ it.
Lars lost to a few dudes, called 'em out b4 he splits, to land even
If u did that shit, it'd be quicker to list the dudes u HAVE beaten
- Simple but straight forward.
You promised ur girl the universe, but Sun her glow is missin'
Needed drugs, so took apart her car stereo n sol' her system
- Mild
U think he tried clappin'? fuck no...music's all this guy's blastin'
It's ironic, we all saw ur name was killing spree...and died laughin'
- I believe I've seen someone used this exact concept on him on RB.
I'm a legend on RB, U a nobody, just a lonely, wack, pretender
U got over 20 losses on a site where ur the only active member
- Simple but straight forward.
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Fox - Not a bad verse bro. I think this may be like the 1st or 2nd time I've ever checked one of your battles out. Decent, never knew you had it in you tbh. Always thought you were just good at your man poems. Keep battling man.
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Killing Spree
see...
alumni? I'll Pop guy & leave a legend Herb slaughtered
start wit shoot'n Witney's & finish wit him dead like her daughter
- Wording & execution was very choppy. Should have taken a little more time on this.
think u winnin? step to the plate, end up cracked till ya dead
Cos only Victa saw u N the BAT, as it swung & opened the back of ya head
- Didn't like this, plus a minor reach here.
plus we know u king D/R, & keep ridin as long as u feel weak
but jus cos u all over Kare Package, doesnt mean u'll level UP to Kill Spree
- Nah... Statement'ish. Should have worked on this one a little longer as well.
Got bars for life that'll keep u swamped in paper for thinkin u so tough
so let this put ya mind in bogs, right next to ur body & the others i dispose of
- This had potential. Mild as is.
u been chill but i've always hated this faggot so im deadin this hoex
between us? its cuts, two ways, me startin wit ya gut & end wit ya throat
- Nah...
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KS - Not sure if you are just rushing your verses or actually not inspired to write but it's sensed by the readers. To me, it felt as if you just through some shit together and didn't give a fuck about the outcome. I've seen a lot better from you. You are wayyyy more creative then this. Wasn't really feelin this verse from you at all my man...
Witty got the edge