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Old 04-27-2013, 06:52 AM   #15
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Zygote:

Dude are you Australian.. Either way sick, I only just started looking into syndicalism a few weeks ago..

This is off subject but you will see links..
I always found the 1968 Olympic black power salute to be strange..
the guy on 3rd place is Australian without the history the photo looks like what it represents “black power over white dominance” but being Australian I’m like why doesn’t he have his fist raised too, in support of unity..
The nationalist where in charge over here that year, Whitlam came in power 72’…

I’m d/ling salute now for answers and Peter Norman is my mates uncle so im speaking to him about it Thursday.. I haven’t b4 but after this I really gots to find out..

ANYWHOOT lol dude vocab is off the godamn chain, story is highly amusing.. how can you have humour when you have to lie to get what you want..
“I want peace for all and I will to deceive to get it” how is that peace, you started off on bad grounds..

Man I like how your character slowly goes insane, war torn and shell shocked.. A guys whos head is lost in space, it reminds me of how Malcom X had to adopt a total different belief system to get his point across.. I see that in your character..

but I duno the celestial thing threw me off because if you where just making a “space cadet” reference like his crazy for adopting anarchism..

it sounded to me like an odd Scientology refernce.. And im unsure if its an ecconimc system as such but it is a belief system, so you threw me..

Tis all cool though.. I love how your character had zero humor himself yet stayed to fight in his job to get his beliefs across.. man dope piece 100%

Red:
Mmm loven the switch, when depression hits to keep productivity.. you gots to lower the minium wage,
Which its suits the recent US capitalist beliefs at the time perfectly :)

Side note at what point does it get raised back up when your living in a capitalist society where the most money has the most power.. yet you’ve got minimum wage at like $7.50 at the same time you have $100,000,000 bankers, politicians, religious associates.. and your still in debt..

Anywhoot I’m drifting, man I loved this line..

"If you can't convince them confuse them"

Dude, I highly enjoyed the insight of your character, history wise but you needed emotion.. heavey, heavy emotion to pull this one off imo.. Due to the fact you where running quotes you lost some of your crazy rhyme structure too..

The spontaneous combustion was dope btw..

Ohh Lmfao @ this..

“Lol made this translation damn son shit wtf constitute something, translate this shit is you I”

loven it.. Wow :)

Vote = zygote

This is a great and insane battle.. you got two opposed ideas just smashing at each other in full force.. very gladiatorial :) shit be swinging, shit be swinging.. I went with zygote cause he had a verse that was just as heavy but didn’t loose his main components of lyrical writing.. Shit was crazy on both parts, I wrote about both of these from a Japanese victim during this time period a few years back.. so this was amusing to me.. if you want the link, hit me up.. highly – highly enjoyed this.. cheers
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