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Witty · 07-28-2015, 03:50 PM

ur a faggot to some, ain't really no fakin it bum
if a dude slides their fist in bust, oh they'll be turned on quicker than one
this was weird to me :/
n that chick u hold dear, I hit her raw let's be clear
the way my shaft lifted that bitch, she'd revolutionize pole vaulting for yrs
ehhh
to hush he's great, but to the league he's gay
it's ironic that after i spaz out, he'll get bodied for 2 weeks straight
decent
those bars r fuckin dull, can't see how voters read his shit
u take so long to reel a punch, we'd rather watch Broke Lesnar go n fish
ok-ish, wording needs work
ya moms ain't a looker real rap, but trust Odd'll tear up the cat
only reason that brute'll come over, is cuz she knows my sex game is just that
not bad

vs

Ur to Fragile to fuck wit me, get that scrawny build crushed
Shiit 1 punch'll have this Detroit pussy plagued wit injuries, that's Chauncy Billups
Don't get it, sorry my bad, I'm a foreign :/
While he tryna be the next Allen, Im consistently makin sure his slut gets dick
So any1 sayin odd, knight...is just pointing out a rare 1 ain't fucked his bitch..
ok
Ya whole Stee is broke, not sure if doe could fix but no1's as lame as U be, ways
So take this sign, can, n ur bummy style to a I-75 off ramp where changes to be made
wording threw me off but this was cool
U ain't talked about cos ur Wack, so wouldn't it be retarded if ya buzzin,
I mean this bitch has to butt his head in every fuckin thread to be part of the discussion
Cool
Spent ur whole life on boards n u FINALLY won ur first site award
see off the top I wanted to give u lots a props... But FN's not a tourny to be prewritin for
Basic, but not bad

Expected more from this battle, Odd can do a lot better, neither really had any big punches, just little jabs but Bust I think had the better concepts, and other than one line, his verse was smoother and worded a lot better. Pretty even on quotes so I'm giving it to Bust for a more creative and well written verse.

Vote - Bust

07-28-2015, 03:50 PM	#4
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,978 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 85235118	ur a faggot to some, ain't really no fakin it bum if a dude slides their fist in bust, oh they'll be turned on quicker than one this was weird to me :/ n that chick u hold dear, I hit her raw let's be clear the way my shaft lifted that bitch, she'd revolutionize pole vaulting for yrs ehhh to hush he's great, but to the league he's gay it's ironic that after i spaz out, he'll get bodied for 2 weeks straight decent those bars r fuckin dull, can't see how voters read his shit u take so long to reel a punch, we'd rather watch Broke Lesnar go n fish ok-ish, wording needs work ya moms ain't a looker real rap, but trust Odd'll tear up the cat only reason that brute'll come over, is cuz she knows my sex game is just that not bad vs Ur to Fragile to fuck wit me, get that scrawny build crushed Shiit 1 punch'll have this Detroit pussy plagued wit injuries, that's Chauncy Billups Don't get it, sorry my bad, I'm a foreign :/ While he tryna be the next Allen, Im consistently makin sure his slut gets dick So any1 sayin odd, knight...is just pointing out a rare 1 ain't fucked his bitch.. ok Ya whole Stee is broke, not sure if doe could fix but no1's as lame as U be, ways So take this sign, can, n ur bummy style to a I-75 off ramp where changes to be made wording threw me off but this was cool U ain't talked about cos ur Wack, so wouldn't it be retarded if ya buzzin, I mean this bitch has to butt his head in every fuckin thread to be part of the discussion Cool Spent ur whole life on boards n u FINALLY won ur first site award see off the top I wanted to give u lots a props... But FN's not a tourny to be prewritin for Basic, but not bad Expected more from this battle, Odd can do a lot better, neither really had any big punches, just little jabs but Bust I think had the better concepts, and other than one line, his verse was smoother and worded a lot better. Pretty even on quotes so I'm giving it to Bust for a more creative and well written verse. Vote - Bust __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.