Welcome to the league DeadLion. You will fit in here, however you were unfortunate enough to be paired with one of the most talented writers in the league for your introductory battle. Your flow was very consistent throughout, you portrayed emotion quite effectively as well. Aside from that, nothing stands out worth mentioning as for as criticism to me.
Pohfig, another awesome read. Week in and week out you are constantly putting up verses that are at least in the running for VOTW. You have a tremendous amount of different high level techniques in your arsenal that all mesh together to create beauty. After reading your verse I get the impression that you just sit down and start writing, and magic happens; raw talent. Thanks for another good read, felt you took this one easily.
+1 Pohfig
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