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Originally Posted by Hush
Lotto Smirk
bore girls with ur theories that's why u'll always get stuck as a friend
if a girl EVER asks him for a date he'll just ramble on About when the world'll end
cool
shud spend money on clothes, instead of the predictions he ain't mastered
chyeahh threads about tsunami's, comets & EQ but the way he dressin is the real disaster
nice flip
why u was focusing on bullshit, I was straight fuckin ya silly whore
now the TRUE conspiracy theory is that ur raising kids that ain't really yours
didn't set this up well to me
Hush's mag got me hyped up, fire I'll spit why ur punches'll never hit
ya verse ain't charged up, it'll be ok worded but no real bangers like that diss
wording is off here
u faker than anyone wi that tough talk,if you front I'll fire shots at u lame
I'll give u that metal gear solid to the dome n I ain't even coppin that new game
wording misses here also
@ Chyeahhh!!!
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Chyeahhh!!!
You're 0 for 2 against me, I'm wishing luck to my opponent
If 3rd times the charm , for u, its in the bottom of a box with the leprechaun on it
nah. not feeling this
Nice no show record! Be glad I came late in the season
This con sent forced 16's and they all said no, guess they call it rape for a reason
what? don't think you set this up well
Yah wording always has suttin missing, switch up your gimmick
Cuz reading your shit is like opening a hallmark card with no duckets in it
ok.
ive heard of Lotto from 8 mile but Lotto Smirk? guys gotta be pissed
I'd bet my balls he got that wack ass name from a textcee lottery pick
not feeling it.
And I give you Cred but that's enough dude
But push my buttons and imma ccccombo breaker yah ass, that's my Attack of the Muff move
i don't get the reference.
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Lotto had a nice opening 2 bars then kinda trailed off. need to tighten up the wording. read the bars and make sure they flow smooth and direct the punch at your opponent in the harshest way you can think of. if your wording is bad it will kill a good concept and it can make you miss on stuff you shouldn't.
chyeeah... ive seen way better from you, not really feeling much in this verse. work on your concepts, cause a lot of them were just word association and simple references. try to make your flip as harsh as possible and use more word play, swagger, and wit to make it hit.
Smirk has this on quotes.
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