eNigma’ma:
Surely you are an audio head.. the way you write with the tight, back to back internals is the sign of someone who seriously records.. I love it.. so straight your styles cool, still poetic with a nice vocab.. and your end bar was a real sweet closer.. im glad I finaly got to see you battle someone :)
Miky mike:
Dude this was ace.. like I mean you set the scene and tbh you could have gone so fucken hectic with this even though you did do plenty.. solid writing, I was kinda like oh man he did make the story about a damn dinosaur not a modern day apocalypse.. but that final line with the mamal smiling was priceless.. perfect way to finish it.. throw the reader into utter doubt then smash em in the face.. loven it..
Vote = mike wrecka
Wow was that unbelievably tough.. it came down to closer and that ish was tight on both parts.. I went with mike cause his cheeky final words where not just comical but held a lot of ground.. that last bar opens up a whole new can of worms.. which cld eventually lead in the same cycle – he leaves it up to the reader, like here you go this is just the begging and I fucken dug the ish outta that.. if this was on wax, nigma wld have taken this by a massive landslide.. but as it stands I got mike and this was a damn ill battle.. cheers guys..
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