O’bomb:
Damn man nice.. I am highly, highly impressed.. you word usage was incredible, your lines delivered well, flowed nicely.. the breaks between stanzas helped the chaotic thoughts of a seemingly madman.. but then so was van gough.. I loved it.. real tight brilliant – brilliant message..
Major Vator:
Hey dude this was tight.. close, well structured compound rhyming.. the whole brainless, blameless, pavement was nice.. your pawn line to was pretty dope.. pace wise it moved smoothly but need more action, this verse needed fierce action to take on O’s brutal verse imo this week.. still sick mate..
Vote = objective
It sucks for innovator cause the boy can write but every week his opponent drops a nuke on the poor guy :) tis all good though.. Obb done destroyed this and is pushing imo to be VOW.. nice match guys, stay up.. pz
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