Mr Just’ice:
What a topic for you n “no good”.. man you killed this ish.. my your pov was amazing, direct with your vivid imagery and beautiful structure.. I loved the whole loss of weapon, I’m like shit dude that’s like admitting to sniffing strange girls panties lol.. yeh cant be caught without your weapon.. but nice nukka this was a cool piece..
No good:
Hey you guys really brought flames this week.. emotional and heart wrenching.. You simplified the vocab usage and multi structure for the fact you had to dig deep to push the right words out.. and it shows, you where clear and precise with a message of love, hope and remberance.. this was cool..
Vote = just write
How can you choice between two true stories of loss in life.. I went for Just write for the massive calamity that occurred within his story.. he set an entire scene with brutal imagery, lacing it with things soldiers generally keep secret about themselves and one another to outsiders.. so just for pushing the envelope that lil more I went with Write.. top notch tales guys..
r.i.p for all your buddies
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