[Tic]

Originally Posted by Odd Ways

-Pray for the Departed

Cred flatlined u harsh, so trust I'm gonna do the same shit
I'll punch his top so hard, when paramedics lift his skull it'll sound like a rain stick
This is decent.
The hood banged ya bitch out, there was no resistin hardly
I saw so many niggas twisted in her sheets, the shit looked like a fuckin toga party
Meh, ok.
Tryna explain ya weak raps, n we're all like damn dude
U used a Greece line so corny, I thought John Travolta would of come n danced through
Lol niceee.
We know he's a hater, the hood says he ain't gettin no paper
Fact: the closest he'll get to a trap King, is catchin dinner every 22 acres
Kinda cool.
This dude is a straight clown, but no worries cuz this tech'll let go
I'll put the metal to this jokers mouth, n give em more exposure than Jared Leto
Ok, not bad.
U act froggy then it's a wrap, u'll be river bound just for actin hard
The way his body'll hit the water, the crime scene'll come w/ olympic judges n scorecards
Ehh, bit of a reach for me.


@fraze

Originally Posted by fraze

edit: meant to post this last night

lost but i got cred last week. sometimes my ‘lines go over heads’.
if this week goes to the wire… i'm choking you after bringing it down around your neck….
Nah, seen this a few times recently and you didn't flip it well enough.
im going for the throat. if you see hawks… better scamper quick…
so fast to give Odd a bull rush with Lynch that I would have won the NFL championship...
Audible? That's a stretch for me.
fraze is hot as sin. shut the fuck up. just nod and grin.
if im at odds with a bitch… ill bust bananas inna face…. now that’s a sloppy cap.a.chin...
[BAlright.[/B]
ya bars are kneelin huddled round corners on my old block.
such a crap shoot... so ill keep shooting odds with the 3-4 cause you know i keep the roll hot….
Okkk. 3 is not a number on the board of Craps, only the Field wins on a 3. I won't take any points off for that though. Not bad. I think you could've executed it better though.
im in the field concealed, sniping bitches with aggressive means…
when i get charged up… i’m prone to ‘pick a low position’ then hit you with the special beam...
Idk, not really feeling this one.
fraze or Bust huh?..... easy win’s what you thought, but *syke*
you’ve been robbed... now you can go Destroyer on the boards like him titty fucking his wife...
Ouch...lol. Cool.

Odd, you had a pretty consistent verse and honestly, one of the better ones I've seen from you. Fraze, you had some misses in here that I wasn't feeling. Your closer was nice and harsh, but some of your other lines didn't have the execution IMO. LOTB is a toss up between the Greece line and Destroyer on the boards....but I got Odd here for consistency. Could go either way though.