I don suppose my vote matters anymore, but this battle was DOPE
Muff had a lot of shit, the strip club owner thing was HEAT, ripple effect was cool, aladdins wished was dope to me and the dohpe dick thing was a nice idea conceptually too, just not worded to hit as hard as it might have but Muff did his thing here, less references to all around shit and more concise hits. everything after the opening four or so I felt at least landed in some form, the Alex Trebek ish I have no idea on as I'm British so maybe that goes completely over my head but that's no fault of his own
Murda Sho: dope as fuck verse here too, loved the love at first sight line that was illy, the shot at Grandeliquent from last week was good, four sin words was dope, this whole shit was fresh at least:
What happened to u!? You lose to votes & to employment...
I mean u was 'posed to be a legend but nowadays u just post to be annoyin
U get banned then spam names, a slew of log-ins acquired dude
Registered so much u'd think atleast a supermarket would hire u
Stop complaining! cause outside they jack u and provoke u dog
...shit this site really might be the only place u DON'T get robbed
Come to my town & ask for some war we drive up & pull the heat
Shots would bounce & pat at ya door like nightclub security
That don't get robbed bar though was KILLER
like holy shit that deaded him
rest was aight but I didn't like the closer
murdas got this
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