U aint out to score.. ur father thought ya life would amount to more..
so he did a Billy Madison to first grade.. & now he showin us how he counts to four.
[this is light]
see this wigger drop, bring all the guns u have.. i got the bigger pop..
one peep outta u & my Tommy will open up at ur neck like that Hilfiger top.
[dope here]
& when I say the L got me loose im smokin the herb, high
when HE says the L got him feelin loose he's just complaining about his shirt size.
[this is cool]
bro, stop cruisin by stores & kill whoever convinced YOU to buy more
cuz that hat got a 'backwards look' dyslexics would choose suicide for.
[miss here]
check this stupid guys pores.. u think ya facial hair grown.?
missin kids can use that crumb trail u call a mustache to find their way home.
[good, creative]
i got serious game.. u got grotesque hands.. what u shows sicker..
now i cant hit a free throw for the life of me.. im distracted by his foam fingers.
[dopeee]
Ur whole style says anorexic loser.. go eat a fry there u goon..
only way u'll ever be Fly is if someone handed this skinny fuckin guy a balloon.
[a Fly concept in 2015 is shameful]
u GOTTA be retarded.. ur genes are from a weak source..
ur face got a Down look that can double a rollercoaster's G force.
[simple, light]
You not only missin a chromosome.. i hate what u sport queer..
ur moms should abort here.. fuck a slope.. ur chin looks like it took a long walk off a short pier.
[nah fell flat, coulda worded cleaner man]
i've listed ur calls, fuck ya iPhone negative 7.. u got a flip that appauls..
u aint go pro..when all u do at the club is dance in place & selfie stick to the wall.
[not feeling the closer]
some dope shit mixed with some misses, i think you're shaking the rust but not at 100 percent just yet, from the Fly line onwards the concepts hurt ya verse imo
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Is this some snooty rich kid or will this gangsta get hostile?
I can't tell if you're turning your nose up at me or just saggin ya nostrils
[not feeling this]
I move weight in the gym & from the porch, Try swingin & you'll get found a corpse
& I'd nevvver take an elbow from u dude. The one ur showing's atleast 6 ounces short
[not crisp enough imo, bad execution]
Lookin like a faggot slash addict who gives out blowies for dimes
That apartment's an ode to Chestnut... but u've gobbled more weiners than him & Stonie combined
[better, now we're starting]
He's a mommas boy.. cuz Pop left soon as he saw this bum, SO fast
ur dream is move to NY... you hope some random black guy there'll call you "son" SO bad
[nah bro this isn't good]
Plus thinkin you look like a mans just asburd fool
You don't have facial hair your upper lips covered by herpes & blur tool
[hahahahaha fucking funny]
Why u got ya fingers up tryna do 'the shocker' when u don't pull no ass my dude
It don't matter that the 4th down & look short... whatever the scenario bitches ALWAYS pass on u
[this was creative and sick]
I bought that same mobile by 5th grade. For '02 that camera worked well holmes
But back then I captured strange creatures wit pokeballs, and not my cell phone
[now you're cooking]
Wherever this poser's gettin his cheap ass clothes? Depressing
How u comin right out the Woodwork... wit an outfit on that Wouldn't in aaanny social setting
[this was nice man]
Kid is so weak, chances u'll sculpt those arms & ya midsection? bleak
I bet you hate christmas .. cuz you're poor .. & have the grinch's physique
[this was terrible lol]
Ya timepiece don't come wit Siri but says "broke fuck". Just stop it fool
No matter how many bands u get u can't change that hideous face... but the watch looks cool
[this is light, wording killed it bro]
u had about four bangers in a row mixed with some bad lines like the Grinch, at other times the concepts were nice but it just all got a little too wordy bro
reading over my feedback Junto had one more quoteable than Ace. i think the Fly line and Grinch line were the worst respectively. it was fairly even throughout with both having some mean fucking bars but Junto edged it barely to me
v Junto by a quote
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