Speakin of racists if u got ur bros on the block to come get me
The semi'd be spraying more hoes than the cops in the 60's
If ur friends hype for u lets see if they fight for u...
When I paralyze u with the 6 like Drizzy lets see if they write for you!
Just cut it out, you've really sucked this round...
I mean because of USB won't be remembered like corrupted files
U wont be at an advantage when these bust off fool
Cause u may have the 2 up on me but I got the peace up on you!
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I thought your whole verse had some slick lines & hard punches
but these are what really stuck out to me and had me like 'oh shit'
you put in work here and it showed with some clean hits and some decent filler hits
everything flowed together pretty nicely, dope work breh
Please respect, you’ll be Gaspin For Air when you meet the tech
Fuck Temperature. My Trigger Finger’ll Empty ya Body of Fluids…that’s a Heat Index
From afar you may look rough, but homie I’m certain ya culo…
On Closer Look, your punches have no Signs of Impact, like the surface of Pluto
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I feel like these were the more clever lines that you delivered
I did enjoy the uh oh punch as well as da bb punch, other than that...
I was having trouble getting the maker, pace/peace punch...if that's what it was
you did great though, you had some great concepts but some of the rhymes were eh
like I know what you were going for but it felt like I had to jump through hoops to get on the same level..
v/I got Sho taking this one due to the entertainment factor
tbh I enjoyed both verses and this was a dope Finals battle right here
I think being in the shadows kind of went out the window as we hit the end though
both had some slick set ups and punches, while Sho had the current events lines
which is always enjoyable as it happens, Tic did as well, more board related though..
in the end I feel as if Sho edged it out even though that opener was ehhhhhhhhhhh
dope battle fella's
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