Vulgar - im loving the flow on this. Reading it was enjoyable cause i could vibe with it. A nice constant stream of thought on this. Nice vocab, it painted a vivid picture. So props for that. Your piece was pretty smooth all the way through. I enjoyed it. Using a lot of metaphors was a nice touch
Topicaldude - also a very nice piece of work here. Your mechanics were also very nice on this and you had so many quotables on this as well. I like how you had a little jump forward in time and kept things so relevant. Props on this as well.
A very hard battle to decide a winner on. Cause they both wrote so well.
Im voting for topicaldude though.
Amazing battle - very tough to pick a winnerr
Sorry vote is so sparse.. im on my phone.
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