Witty, ur whole verse was good. The personals were on point and the wording was crisp. Not a huge fan of the MJ line but it was still decent. The opener was dope tho, and im not English but something tells me if I was I would like the closer more, but it was still OK. Pity props was lulz n lars back pedalling was a good flip on a concept everyone is doing this week, I like how u went a diff direction tho. Overall this is a solid verse bro, props.
Mr. J.
---I don't get how 'riding my name' ties into this? Like the snatch/brad Pitt part tho.
---Ehh this is played, bumping music/bumping threads, seen it a few times.
---I didn't really like this, u say forget the milk carton like ur setting up a him being missing concept then say he's buried in a box of lucky charms. Went from setting up him being missing to him being dead, which may have been ur point and I'm stupid but I thought it took away from the punch. And lucky charms...cmon u know that's played.
--+Wasn't feeling witty comeback, I thought u could've flipped it a lot better.
---I don't get it. But I don't fuck with aowl.
Overall: I like some of mr j's concepts but I feel like he over thinks the wording, he tries to word it like a topical. That's just what ingot from it. Wittys verse was good for all five bars n that's a rarity these days.
V. Witty
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